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Patiently Waits-Tanka

Dried up surroundings Everything barren and dead Under winter shroud Yet life is alive beneath Patiently waits to sprout forth

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2013 5:40:00 PM

here is a recent one I missed. I really like this one, Irfana!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2012 12:52:00 PM

Got that one correct..The plants all know that spring will come..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 1/1/2013 6:36:00 AM

Thanks Sara....:))

Holly Moore

Date: 12/27/2012 4:37:00 AM

This is very beautiful...we do not have snow here..but everything is barren. I can hardly wait until spring when everything is colorful again. Very nicely written...Thanks for your comments..Hugs, Holly Moore