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Past Proposal

The sun left the sky as I lay on the sand with a three diamond ring resting cold in my hand I lay in the place where I once wrote your name Till soft ripples of waves lapped in silence on shore and washed it away I can still see you there whispering in my ear and beneath a half moon can still freeze our time in the shadow of your tear I remember that night Our arms in embrace I saw love in your eyes and mourn on your face I remember those lights as the ship sailed at bay I remember our dream built on castles of clay Unforgotten your voice though lost in the mist Years in waiting,a return My lips still unkissed I wonder if your fingertips remember my hair If in your serene sleep You imagine me there? Or,Have you forgotten the promise we shared Through new perfume of women Does this heart go unheard?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/16/2015 3:57:00 PM
Great love poems! Wish I were in my 20's again andcould be under your spell!!
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Date: 9/26/2014 12:42:00 PM
Wonderful ride Charma, thanks for sharing this lovely gem... K
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Date: 9/26/2014 11:41:00 AM
Yes, my fingertips remember your hair. :) You always have such great imagery, compelling and enchanting, full of delicious passion.
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:03:00 AM
A romantic write, a touching poem with longing and the sweet memories hidden..
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Date: 9/26/2014 6:22:00 AM
really charmaine a touching beautifully penned piece
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Date: 9/26/2014 4:59:00 AM
A lovely poem of longing, my dear. Sad and haunting...love can be unkind to the one who loves. I know. Sending you hugs
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Date: 9/25/2014 10:55:00 PM
You are unforgettable sweetie.... The grace of your step...the depth of your soul....the size of your heart....would make any man whole.....simply beautiful.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 9/25/2014 8:12:00 PM
A very beautiful romantic insight into a woman's thoughts. A truly awesome write!
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Date: 9/25/2014 6:52:00 PM
I feel the longing from across the ocean. I can't believe anyone would be so foolish as to not kiss such a beauty when presented with the opportunity. Some men are blind to the mysteries of a woman. This is beautiful Charmaine.
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