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Passion Reverse

can we touch again on sheets of white where passion falls between us i linger in thoughts of love and lust memories somewhat fade through wrinkles of time i feel hands against bare flesh a warm breath on my neck stumbles a kiss from your lips through darkness passion awakes

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Date: 8/30/2013 6:02:00 PM
So nice to see it done well in free verse! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:36:00 PM
sweet congrats on your fine win, sandra..:) huggs
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:07:00 AM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 8/28/2013 9:15:00 AM
Love the wake me up call in your poem.. Sandra, congratulations... Linda
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Date: 8/28/2013 7:26:00 AM
So romantic! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:22:00 PM
Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:17:00 PM
thank you so much Morgan...hugs
Date: 8/27/2013 4:13:00 PM
Ooooooooo...nice.congratulations... great win....
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:17:00 PM
Thank you Donna :) hugs
Date: 8/27/2013 3:21:00 PM
Soft and sensual.....this is a beauty ! Congrats on your winning poem !!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:19:00 PM
well thank you Carrie...hugs
Date: 8/20/2013 11:35:00 AM
Good read
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:22:00 PM
thank you ...hugs
Date: 8/19/2013 6:08:00 AM
you pen beautiful from the light to darkness awakening passions kiss
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:23:00 PM
well thank you :) hugs
Date: 8/19/2013 4:03:00 AM
my, a lush of fire blazing between your lines... a sensory feast, sandra... well done!.:) huggs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:23:00 PM
thanks so very much Nette.....hugs :)
Date: 8/19/2013 12:22:00 AM
So adaptive & sensual. It's all about that bare flesh and what triggers those senses. Excellent!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:24:00 PM
well thank you Drake...it was a fun challenge for me...hugs
Date: 8/18/2013 9:44:00 PM
Nice with a very sensual feel that works when read both ways ...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:25:00 PM
thank you so much Karen ...I appreciate all your kind comments...hugs
Date: 8/18/2013 9:38:00 PM
I really like this. A great reverse poem! Very nicely done. :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/27/2013 7:26:00 PM
thank you April...have a great night....hugs

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