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Passing Time

time passing even the bumble bee counts coup holes in my walls holes in my walls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/11/2012 3:55:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:20:00 AM
hahaha...fun tanka, Charles! Repetition works well..Gwendolen
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Date: 4/18/2012 2:36:00 PM
Love the repeated lines....great impact!
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Date: 4/18/2012 4:23:00 AM
An interesting write by you Charles.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 4/17/2012 11:43:00 PM
Nice write..
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