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Black Marmalade

Slicing the instinct The arcane was torn, curses spit Teardrop bated as the breath hunts Wound wide open, the heart cries The ripple of pain unable to stem The cimmerian sigh loud and stay Body falls along with the bridge of hope Toying life unwillingly to be blamed The chain of fate convoluted by mistakes Incised by the foredoom of another story Shouted a shout inevitable said Reverses direction and unpredictably impaled Breath blows the true bitterness Jaded in each lamentation Tired of every abnormalities which frequently ensue Longing for the things which reasonably flows as it should Life is about to choose Though destiny had its own script We have awarded a red carpet, but Sorry if we still have to walk on the imperfections of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/15/2013 7:58:00 AM
Good night Yanny
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Date: 3/12/2013 7:26:00 PM
fate and destiny have a script unlike ours.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/12/2013 7:28:00 PM
Agree with that :) thank you for visiting :D "the situation" in here :p
Date: 3/11/2013 6:29:00 PM
Hi Yanny, are you done with all your marking?
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/12/2013 7:29:00 PM
Today is the last day, I will catch up soon :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, yanny
Date: 3/10/2013 5:51:00 AM
Every day has its challenges, and we learn something new .... Hope your day will be beautiful. - A very well written poem Yanny ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/10/2013 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Anne, wishing you a beautiful day as well :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/9/2013 5:37:00 AM
And we do all have to walk on the imperfections of life but as they say Yanny , 'what doesn't kill us makes us stronger', but I could do with that red carpet sometime luv, another wonder from you xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/9/2013 5:54:00 AM
Agree Mandy! I do believe what doesn't kill us make us stronger :D, it is really interesting to know what you are thinking Mandy :D, wishing you wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/8/2013 9:25:00 AM
Hey Yanny, I'm still here in Mexico enjoying the sun. I hope all is well with you this evening.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/9/2013 5:53:00 AM
Glad to hear from you Rick, wishing you a happy holiday in exotic Mexico :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/5/2013 9:31:00 PM
I always love the imagery you sprinkle throughout your poetry. Wonderful!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/9/2013 5:52:00 AM
thank you Andrea glad that you like it :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/5/2013 8:36:00 PM
I like your poem Yanny, i like the jaded image, deep... great flow,, the way it should be..pd
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/5/2013 8:47:00 PM
Thank you Linda :D, pleasured to have you here :D, have a wonderful day :)- hug, yanny
Date: 3/5/2013 4:30:00 PM
I read your poem again, it is very good. I hope today is nothing but wonderful for you Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/5/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Rick for your visit today, I'm still focusing on my work and cannot wait for next week when all my my hectic time is over :D, so that I can write for some more :D, glad to see your present today :), wishing you a wonderful day as well :D - hug, yanny
Date: 3/4/2013 9:53:00 AM
This is a beautiful write Yanny. Your last stanza is just great. Thanks and have a nice day. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/5/2013 5:45:00 PM
Thank you Lucii, :D wishing you wonderful day as well :D - hug, yanny
Date: 3/3/2013 12:43:00 PM
Hi Yanny luv this superb, just luv it girl xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/3/2013 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Mandy, nice to have you here too :D - hug, yanny
Date: 3/1/2013 6:01:00 AM
such sincerity in here Yanny, speaks volumes of you not only as a poet, but as a person...wonderful poetry..
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 AM
I really feel touched by your words, they are deep for me :D, thank you Harry for giving time to visit, wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 3/1/2013 2:33:00 AM
This is really true. Such an amazing write of yours which I've extremely enjoyed reading today my dear friend Yanny. I will favourite this one if you don't mind. Thank you so much for sharing! love always, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/1/2013 9:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Leonora it is really such an honor for me :D, wishing you a wonderful night there :) - hug, yanny
Date: 2/28/2013 7:39:00 AM
A morning treat, I am so happy to read your poem this morning. This was a great way to begin my day.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/28/2013 4:41:00 PM
Thank you Rick, a morning treat to me too for having such an uplifting comment by you :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/27/2013 9:32:00 PM
A gripping , powerful piece! Quite sensational! Thanks for sharing this splendid write! Hope to read more from you soon! Always, Laura
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/27/2013 11:15:00 PM
Thank you Laura, glad that you like it :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, Yanny

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