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Brown and green colors of dirt and grass three inches tall in spring mud between my toes wet from the sprinkler I ran through this afternoon. Under a lowering gray sky fallen wet maple leaves red and yellowey brown veined against the stiff dying lawn dusted with glitter from last night’s frost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/22/2013 11:39:00 AM
Oh I love this one. I can see Winter creeping in and in such a vivid way! Your pen writes with a true poets eyes. Lov, Shar
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Jack Jordan
Date: 10/22/2013 11:49:00 AM
I'm thankful it's not yet that cold where I am, but it soon will be... Jack
Date: 1/29/2013 9:06:00 AM
...so fine written and lovely poem..thank you for sharing you great write dear friend Jack Jordan..<3 enjoyed :)
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Date: 1/29/2013 9:47:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments. Jack

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