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Pass It Please

"Please pass the chicken", Daddy said. I watched the platter pass with dread As each big brother took his choice Would there be only wings for Joyce? It was so hard to sit and wait. Daddy took two legs on his plate. I felt the dreaded tear drops start. He knew that was my favorite part. My brother Charley liked the feet, The part that no one else would eat. Mama's favorite was the breast But I liked the big drumsticks best. As the smallest I was always last To hold the platter as it passed. Now all my favorites were gone. I turned away as it passed on. As I let the necks and wings go by, My daddy with twinkle in his eye Said "Here's yours, Joybell, I took two, But saved the biggest leg for you." I know it now if I were able To have those dears ones at my table, I'd pass them all the legs and thighs. And declare the wings were just my size. For Paula's "Pass " contest won 9th in contest

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Date: 10/4/2010 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula Swanson's contest "Pass". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:12:00 PM
Hey Joyce, Hope you're doing well. Congratulations on your worthy win in Paula's Contest.. Enjoy your win! Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:51:00 AM
congrats on your chicken poem...love it. BG
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:59:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win in the Pass contest.. enjoy this super Sunday with luv..
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Date: 9/26/2010 1:57:00 PM
I remember those days. It was hard for mom to fill up four growing boys. Charles
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:10:00 AM
Smiles, Joyce. The wings are my favorites! And I do remember passing the plate around each Sunday (that was chicken day at our house). But it was my older brother who received the platter last. Whatever was left, he would simply dump onto his plate. And the human garbage disposal never wasted one bit of it. We loved teasing him about it, though. You brought back wonderful memories for me and now I'm more determined than ever to rejoin my family in NJ. How I miss those days. Love, CD
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:39:00 AM
very unique write with nice theme you have chosen, Joyce
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Date: 9/24/2010 10:10:00 PM
Aww you sure got the sweetest daddy, Joyce-- this was definitely heartwarming! Enjoyed your take on the challenge made me smile ^_^ btw, in L2S6, I think there's a sneaky word there-- "the"-- hope this helps-- wish you the bets in the contest :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:16:00 PM
Very enjoyable write, and got me a little hungry...always Michael
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