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Party Play

Parents play party games Perfecting playful parts Children cherish chocolate Soft savory sweet tarts Fun for all forgotten As adults go away Leaving little lambs alone Protecting party play

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Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/12/2014 11:38:00 PM

Betty, nice alliteration of kids' party play. Congrats for nice win. Mohan

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/12/2014 8:48:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Betty! Hugs.. Arlene

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/12/2014 7:17:00 PM

Congrats on a great write ....Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/12/2014 3:29:00 PM

Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/12/2014 10:36:00 AM

Well crafted win, Betty. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2014 8:24:00 AM

You have the perfect name to go along with the theme. I enjoyed your wining poem, congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/12/2014 7:05:00 AM

Lovely sweet poem Betty. Like your alliteration; not an easy form to do. Congrats on your win. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/12/2014 5:22:00 AM

Funny and witty, Betty and congrats on the win in my contest

Tim Smith

Date: 7/6/2014 10:58:00 AM

So light and lovely Betty...good luck...hugs Tim