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Principally, pretty Penny the poet gave the ILLUSION of preening Outside the Palace in the portico pre-party. Edward the Bard entered elegantly, elaborating with an INFUSION of Trendy calligraphy pens and colored inks of CREATIVITY. Ralph, the Shakespearian sonnet writer EVENTUALLY strolled in with a scroll. You would think none of them new each other, as they Practically knocked each other over getting to the press. At any other time, Annabelle the actress would have been Languishing on a director’s arm but tonight, she had An editor! How INEVITABLE! Clarisse came to the Palace Ball dressed as Cleopatra and carrying a clay tablet full of Egyptian poetry, who would win for best piece was anyone’s guess. Poet:Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 5/23/2011 12:35:00 PM
This has me wondering Debbi, and i see it has taken a prize congratulations!
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:56:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest...Love, gautami
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Date: 5/21/2011 2:55:00 AM
love this! Many congrats to you Debbie x
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations, Debbie, I love your poem~~
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:03:00 AM
...Class-ic, acertain u-turn from new-Town sensibi-lity to old-ish excellence of Class-ical poe-tree!!! not sou-pri-sed it'was from your celebrated pen, Deb!!! take up the trumpet, get into town and celebrate with all nature!!! Canny
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Date: 5/20/2011 9:36:00 AM
Many congrats on your deserved win!
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:10:00 PM
Soupmail~
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:52:00 PM
This one is DIFFERENT from the other entries.Congrats Debbie on your win .
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest Debie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:35:00 AM
Very clever and great use of alliteration, Deb. Congratulations on your win in the Poetry Palace contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:10:00 AM
ineresting story
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:26:00 AM
Terrific !! Like a mini movie....you are too clever!!(and should have been at the top!!)....love the story you have told. oh..ps..many thanks for the placement in your wonderful contest on Japan, we need to keep them in our long term agenda, and writing can help them....and thank you thank you, for putting limits on your placements!!
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of linda, debbie
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:06:00 AM
Alliteration is doused throughout-my fav form and u have penned it so well. Gwendolen CONGRATS CONGRATS CONGRATS CONGRATS!!!!!
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:39:00 AM
LOL this is great fun, Debbie. Absolutely unique. Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:56:00 AM
a theme party so cool, debs! way to twist this around with my funky congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:19:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your third place win in my contest with this creative write .. thankxx for your constant support luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:01:00 PM
I love it...............Great mind !!!!Always an adventure!!!~and to think, you haven't wrote about me yet.....God bless ^Rick
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:52:00 PM
Nice perspective to write on the theme of the contest. Wonderful way, Debbie
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Date: 5/18/2011 3:47:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Debbie .. good luck luv.. am sure will be amazed by the title alone ..oh.. reading fully as judging time draws closer and have fun reading all the great entries ... appreciate your support...
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