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In April, I was contacted by the president of the Canadian Authors Association to see if I would be interested in writing poetry  for a book of photography by Darren Creighton, of Canada, who had compiled, through his travels, pictures of stone angels in grave yards. The photo's he provided, were the inspiration for the following Epic.  I wish I could show you each and every one of the photos that go with each verse, but alas...it is not possible.  

  You can preview or purchase this book by going to your search engine and typing in the following:  Earthbound Angels Made of Stone by:  Darren Creighton and Elaine George.

 

 

 

We dwell in quiet places Where mortals sleep eternally We earthbound angels made of stone Keeping vigil for thee Stone angels carved by human hands In honor of the dead Giving meaning to the path Where mortals dare to tread And if you care to rest a spell In this quiet place we dwell You too will come to understand The stories we will tell Stories that are etched in stone For each departed soul And their journey here on earth The greatest stories ever told So listen very carefully With your heart and not your ears And with our silent voices Let us take you through the years Of one dearly departed And her life of joy and tears From the cradle to the grave A life of courage and of fear Now step with us into this realm Where earth and heaven meet And see the petals of this Rose Strewn o'er the cobbled streets And like the rose that bears her name May her beauty bloom again In all its glory in this story Amid the thorns that still remain Let us tell you of a child Born in eighteen twenty-five A little girl so pure and shy She made the willows sigh In a land where wooden ships With canvas wings did fly On a wailing wind With the moon and the stars Their only guide A child born without a sin The way that life begins Who at the age of seventeen Lost her innocence To a Captain Twice her age Who on that fateful day Took away her freedom When she became his slave How at the age of 17 She finally came to know The bitter thorn that lies beneath The beauty of the rose As she hid his seed Beneath a frock Of slavery and shame And her face beneath a veil of tears Each one Cried in vain Bought by this man A widower Raising babes that weren't her own She called upon her inner strength To make this land her home While he remained for months at sea She waited patiently Until the day when one-by-one The leaves fell from the trees As autumn died And heaven cried Her baby girl was born While all the village gossips Looked at Rose with utter scorn A stranger in a strange strange land A Rose that whites called black In that moment realized There was no going back She named her daughter Amber With hair the hue of flames A child of God who town-folk dubbed The Captain's child of shame And like the thorns that laid in wait beneath her mother Rose This child would one day come to know The evil they would sew A child with blood of black and white A heavy cross to bear Who could not In her innocence Conceive The evil lurking there ``` The remainder of this epic can be read in Part Two posted in my next entry. Please proceed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/28/2016 10:24:00 AM
Now this was an epic adventure. I love the creativity in this, the imagination is amazing and the rhyming and cadence made this long poem seem almost too short. Beautifully done
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Elaine George
Date: 10/28/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris. Much appreciated. Lainey.
Date: 10/27/2016 6:16:00 PM
Yes, I need to see the ending of this, Elaine. Riveting!
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 10/25/2016 11:50:00 PM
More than a 7...should be a 10!
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Date: 10/28/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Carole. This means a lot to me. Lainey
Date: 10/25/2016 11:25:00 PM
So far, so fantastic! Anxious to read the next....Carole
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Elaine George
Date: 10/28/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Carole, and for your kind comments. Lainey
Date: 10/25/2016 10:49:00 AM
Things sad yet true and told with tenderness is what we always receive from you, Elaine. Light & Love Always Debbie
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Elaine George
Date: 10/28/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, dear Deb, and for your kind comments. Lainey.
Date: 10/24/2016 2:46:00 PM
Your poetry is amazing as always, Elaine! The link mentioned in the blog wouldn't open for me for some reason, but I'm so glad I was able to find your poem was posted here ! I am on to part 2 !! Lovely work .....Congratulations !!
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Elaine George
Date: 10/25/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Carrie. Your support means so much to me. Elaine
Date: 10/24/2016 4:04:00 AM
So many beautiful, poetic lines. Great inspirational story as well. Wonderful writing!
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Elaine George
Date: 10/24/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Joe, and for your kind comments. If you go to my blog, you will find the website address where this epic in book form tied together with photography can be viewed or purchased. By for now, Elaine
Date: 9/26/2016 10:23:00 AM
Beautiful narration in poetic language, Elaine! Truly inspired! Very much impressed....now over to part 2 :) Warm regards // paul
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Elaine George
Date: 10/25/2016 10:04:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Paul. My book Earthbound Angels Made of stone can be viewed by going to your browser and typing in darrencreightonphotography.com, then scroll down to the line that says preview first few pages and click on it.
Date: 9/26/2016 7:03:00 AM
Wow, i'm spell bound..this is amazing.
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Elaine George
Date: 10/25/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind comments, Harry. The book can now be previewed or purchased by going to your browser and typing in darrencreightonphotography.com then scroll down to, Preview first few pages, and click on it.
Date: 9/19/2016 11:27:00 AM
amazed i am following :))
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Elaine George
Date: 10/24/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Talin. If you go to my blog, you will find the website address where you can preview my book, Earthbound Angels Made of Stone. The epic tied together with the photography of Darren Creighton. By for now, Elaine
Date: 6/30/2016 12:36:00 PM
So let's see how the story ends. Love, daver
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Elaine George
Date: 10/24/2016 12:53:00 PM
Dear Dave, Thank you for stopping by. If you go to my blog, you will find the website address where you can preview the book, Earthbound Angels Made of Stone. By for now, Elaine

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