Parenting

. Quickly feed zip-zoom Babies in the trumpet shaped nest Can't take time to rest

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/1/2010 5:30:00 AM

Cute Haiku, Sara! This is the time now for baby birds!...Yes, Sara, whiskies have about 40% alcohol but it is so interesting to taste the differences as it depends on the fired malt (sometimes on peat) and the different water used..Have a great weekend...Gert

Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 4/29/2010 10:18:00 PM

HAHAZ, I DNT GET TIRED OF miLeY! SHEZ MY LIL SIDEKICK,WHEN SHE CAN MOVE, SHE GONNA GET KRAZY FUNNY WIT MOMMY.LOL. .LIK MOTHER LIKE DAHTER.WIT OUT THE MISTAKES I MADE OF CORSE bUfFy

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/28/2010 9:09:00 PM

Yeah, I remember those days! Seems as if sometimes I did not have time to breathe. Lovely poem that said so much about being a parent. Excellent work!

John Freeman

Date: 4/28/2010 8:31:00 AM

This is also a cool take on the photo Sara. I have read that hummungbirds are always just minutes away from starvation. You captured this fact in your Haiku. In Can't take time to rest. Smile, Agape, Moses

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/27/2010 5:57:00 PM

thats cute. who would possibly want to rest in the presence of a cute baby.lol.everyone would as time passes that's for sure. -Always&Forever LYnette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/27/2010 7:20:00 AM

enjoyed, we found one of our baby blue bird eggs destroyed in the yard. they are such pretty blue speckled eggs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2010 9:17:00 PM

Very nice, Sara. I wanted to research a bit about that bird so I could try out the haiku but I knew it would close before I could do that. I can tell that you probably already knew alot about hummingbirds! Luv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/26/2010 12:26:00 PM

cute poem mom, hope you are feeling ok.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2010 10:52:00 AM

One can just imagine, enjoyed,..p.d.