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Parent To Parent

I got disobedience So equally on my behalf, I wish that sometimes i wasnt so negative driving on the wrong path, Cant really conquer much my accomplishment sucks, Because I haven't been Taught properly on how to love!. So many days I replay my Thoughts, And so many days I get multiple faults, They keep accusing me of stealing and touching, But I touch what i havent,and i take whats not mine, Because i havent been taught from the adults, To guard only whats mine, But exactly What can i claim if I have not 2 extra Lifes in my Life to direct my playing, Parent to parent is not only a memo but its a saying!. I need you!.

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Date: 8/4/2016 7:55:00 PM
I definitely felt you what you were going through in this piece...you should post more!!!
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:58:00 PM
Donella Williams,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/27/2016 8:37:00 PM
Donella, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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