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Parched Precipitation

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Parched Precipitation

He Drains the Liquid

From The Heavens, and Gulps It

From a Broken Cup.


15 Seconds To Start Upon Reading Contest Description.

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  1. Date: 9/10/2009 3:33:00 PM
    This is amazing... I love the last line especially =] I love you.

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 3:09:00 PM
    Love this senryu! Very evocative. I think we all drink grace from a broken beautiful cup. Good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 2:04:00 PM
    Vivid image, Conor. Rainwater is a blessing when it has been too dry for a long time. Hope to see more of you on the Soup. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 1:55:00 PM
    Conor whats up - Sounds great to me best wishes in the contest - God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 1:45:00 PM
    I like the alliteration in the title--captured my attention. Inspirational view. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 1:22:00 PM
    Nicely written Senryu. Keep writing. Sara