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felt like i did before thats how i know i missed ya if i could then i woulda grabbed ya hugged and kissed ya bachelor for eternity missing the bigger picture you i barely knew, appearing on every vista i appreciate the support, but what i need is love tho truth may hurt, better than all of the above i trusted you cause you represent something ive never done, who knew that two can prove to be better than one or first in a place, never won a sum, bygones gone and a couple of puns we let the honey run till sweet enough touch beat around the bush, no rush it got hotter but the wetaher didnt change not a cloud in the sky or a drop of blame no need for a why whenw e had an x we gotta where we wanted then decided what next no matter where i go over land and sea id rather have you cause one is lonely keep me company three not necessary feels real comfy has since february february march april may june july august in a day the longer we go the more we grow feeling better each step of the way if theres a problem we can talk and double check nothing we cant solve with an embrace and kiss to the face or neck i love you more than ode and penelope. maria odb or lil kim and biggie thank the gods we aint in a greek tragedy or sometime before 19 sixty for what is feminin sent me to my questionin i quickly collected evidence, respect exactly what i expected, experiencing the extension my seconds, perspective as my lessons i remember when im stressing to fit into my senses, lower my defenses soothing if theres tenseness, leaving room for suggestion did i mention that youre precious a gift of personal appreciation, when we regard eachother in highest celebration shared by lovers, so more than any i thank you for willing to get as close as you do i hope for you the complimentary is true im sure if it wasnt we can talk it through its coo right there is reason why i call you boo no matter where i go over land and sea id rather have you cause one is lonely keep me company three not necessary feels real comfy has since february february march april may june july august in a day the longer we go the more we grow feeling beter each step of the way

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Date: 10/2/2012 11:11:00 PM
Lovely write Davin! Love how you've referenced various couples in connection to your own. Nice! Very nice!
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Davin Payne
Date: 10/5/2012 12:35:00 AM
Thank you for seeing that. I really appreciate it. <3
Date: 9/30/2012 9:51:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Davin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Davin Payne
Date: 9/30/2012 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol. I have been making my way through the site, and there is undoubtedly many talented poets.

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