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Paradise

His heart awakens Eyes taken In a soft gaze upon the moon Had he been mistaken? To find such beauty Within divine love so true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/29/2016 9:40:00 AM
As per a new poet here, I decided to go for your best poems and I must say that this one left me flabbergasted! You are a gem, a star and a potential mega duper souper! Keep on writing friend and you are highly welcome to PS... A definite 7
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Date: 2/27/2016 11:11:00 PM
To the point, good job. Charlie
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:05:00 PM
Simply and beautiful. Wonderful job :)
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