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Below is the poem entitled Paradise which was written by poet Steve Edmonds. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The lush green foliage,
Palm trees waving in the wind
On a lonely beach.

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  1. Date: 2/11/2009 8:28:00 PM
    Theres nothing better to be in paradise with palm trees waving in the wind...LOL Great Haiku,love Christina

  1. Date: 12/19/2008 4:14:00 PM
    What a vision...I can feel the breeze right now....always, Christy

  1. Date: 12/19/2008 2:27:00 PM
    The scene you are describing here is marvelous. I love the thought of being on a lonely beach...Raul

  1. Date: 12/19/2008 1:36:00 PM
    This haiku is nicely penned. You have a good one here Caramel. DN