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Tiffany Mosaic Hues of Blues Pantoum Form Tiffany mosaic hues of blues Reflecting on the vast ocean’s glass o’re An unexplored big blue world Pursues to crawl on its belly up the inland shore Reflecting on the vast ocean’s glass o’re Reaching as far as its foaming fingers can amend Pursues to crawl on its belly up the inland shore Imprints left against the golden grains of sand Reaching as far as its foaming fingers can amend Receding horizons perennially blue sky sinking to weave Imprints left against the golden grains of sand Expanding as far as the sapphire blue eyes can see Receding horizons perennially blue sky sinking to weave Sounds of ocean waves captured in the majesty’s wind Expanding as far as the sapphire blue eyes can see As we swallow the scents of briny tears and wet sand Sounds of ocean waves captured in the majesty’s wind An unexplored big blue world As we swallow the scents of briny tears and wet sand Tiffany mosaic hues of blues 2/27/2016

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Date: 4/13/2016 8:50:00 AM
Hi Eve. Congrats for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/28/2016 3:33:00 AM
Like I was at the Ocean :)
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Date: 2/28/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, Amy, that makes me feel good that you can feel yourself in the poem :) Hugs Eve
Date: 2/27/2016 10:21:00 PM
Not the easiest form...good job, like "as we swallow the scents..." Well wishes, Charlie
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Date: 2/27/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thank you so much , Charlie, for the compliment and the well wishes. Hugs Eve

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