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Pandemonium

Pandemonium P aranoia proliferates among pretending believers A nxious and terrified by extremist behaviours N arcissisitic society of self obsessed materialists D emand and devour all hedonistic offerings E nveloping themselves in nationalistic fervor M anifesting their opposition to a united world O bedient only to their own selfish myopic concepts N uclear war again raises ugly spectre on the horizon I deologies clash like the Titans in battle, while U nderlying hatred, animosity and xenophobia M anoeuvre mankind masterfully to monumental misery John Derek Hamilton July 07,2016

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/27/2016 12:17:00 PM

I don't think anyone could improve upon your well-written, deep Acrostic which you maneuvered masterfully! In truth, one would need more starting letters to list all negatives contributing to 'dark.' I'll give this a go, but just to contribute - I have no desire or thoughts to better what you have written. Can you enter your own? Kidding CayCay

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2016 2:38:00 PM

Thanks Cay Cay, no surprise to me but some entries are already better, I'm just average Joe poet. Thanks for your visit and encouragement. Look forward to yours!