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Painting Paradise

As I arrived heaven… in love and light I searched for my pen and pad, to write a poem for paradise. Alluring in my eyes, hoping to write about this holy height. Viewing the Holy One’s thrilling throne, Hear the agile angel’s terrific… tone. No noon, no night; lifelong love and light. My pen can’t paint paradise… all alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 8:40:00 PM
I especially like the first one, Adeleke. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/16/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations to you Adeleke on your win in John Freeman and Carolyn Devonshire's shared contest "Double Limerick Inspiration". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:03:00 PM
Very nice Adeleke. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:05:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Adeleke
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:58:00 PM
Congrats for your well deserved win. Alll the best, Iolanda
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:46:00 PM
Congrats Adeleke on your big win in the Double Limerick contest with this great piece ...enjoy another momentous victory this happy Sunday..with luv.. am in Italy..luv..yeah..
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Adeleke for the special effort on your part, and congratulations on your place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/13/2010 8:02:00 AM
"I searched for my pen and pad, to write" isn't that just like a writer, you couldn't have begun this poem better.
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Date: 8/11/2010 3:12:00 PM
very creative nice job
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:41:00 AM
beautifully done
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