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Painting By Sorrows

Gentle strokes of sorrow brush over you. Fragility of soulless eyes deep blue Are closing, weeping tears of knowing truth. Be gone haunting questions of destiny.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/25/2009 4:45:00 PM
Beautiful image!
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Date: 5/21/2009 11:24:00 AM
Wow in a few words you affected me deeply you really are very clever well done ... Love Jayne
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Date: 5/19/2009 8:52:00 AM
You paint a sorrowful and deeply emotional picture here we can all relate to at some point in our lives. Love that last line especially. Exceptional poetry. Thanks for your comments - the second one had me giggling. Warmest wishes. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 5:35:00 PM
Paul, Sometimes truths' reality can make one cry. Especially when their hoped destiny falls to the wayside in a moment's frenzy. You have a well written poem with a nice flow here. Keep writing, DAS-J
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:36:00 AM
The ending is terrific..be gone haunting questions of destiny..I can see the madness of these questing probing this mind..so well done.
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:05:00 AM
I like this poem.Very direct and deep,keep it up!
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