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Painted Fire

Chilled by crisp air Warmed by nature’s painted Fire in the fall sky Inspired by Brian's fall haiku contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/18/2009 9:03:00 PM
Visual haiku, Krista, and so vivid in expression.. u could almost feel the crisp air ... and see the fire in the fall sky... enjoyed .. and thankxxx for your nice comments on my poetry tonight... with blessings... luv... appreciate your reading them... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words today Krista.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/18/2009 12:49:00 PM
this is the image you get in the morning and at sun set.... magical moments!
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Date: 9/4/2009 3:24:00 PM
I really like the last line in this one. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 8/25/2009 7:47:00 PM
Various sensations in the name of Fall. Beautiful Haiku, Krista. Thank you for your comment on my "Casino". Love and be healthy, Iolanda
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Date: 8/25/2009 6:11:00 PM
love the vision! Krista! jimbo
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Date: 8/25/2009 2:39:00 PM
Just beautiful Kirsta>>James
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Date: 8/25/2009 2:15:00 PM
Nicely describing fall. Keep writing. Sara
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