Paint

I can paint you a picture In colors gay and bright But my favorites are the ones I make late at night The tortured works of art that see into my soul The ones that help me feel in control The ones that help me cope with all that's inside The ones that can help me say Goodbye

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2015 9:45:00 PM

Hi Shyla, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 2:26:00 PM

Shyla, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ian Jones

Date: 8/17/2015 4:44:00 AM

Oh Shyla. This is so dark and so sad, just makes me want to reach into the poem and lift the subject out of there and take them on a whirlwind trip to see the beauty of the world and the millions of good people just a breath away. The bullies will fade, they have already started to when they chose that path. Flip a finger and live beyond them. Kind regards, Ian