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For the Tammy Reams' Pain Of Night contest

Pain Of The Night There is a short story of Hemingway’s Called “A Clean Well-Lighted Place”. An old widower in a small Spanish town Nightly frequents a café until it closes down. Behind his back, some of the waiters deride Him, because the widower had attempted suicide. One married waiter complained repeatedly, That because of him they couldn’t ever close early. However one older waiter had more sympathy, Because like the old man, he had no family. The old waiter understood that pain in the night, Could be held back in a place that’s clean and bright. I remember when I was single and free to roam, And later as a soldier deployed far from home, That old message of Ernest Hemingway’s About needing a clean well-lighted place. Without love and family, life seems just sleep and work. Solitude is most oppressive sitting in the dark. Our connection to others helps keep us alive; Gives us meaning and a reason to survive. So if you have nobody, and feel the pain of the night, Surround yourself in a place that’s clean and bright.

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Date: 12/9/2018 3:23:00 PM
This is an excellent write, Mark. a Clean Well-Lighted Place, I enjoyed. A real pleasure to read this cold afternoon! It's Annalise... Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
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Date: 3/10/2015 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, and my pleasure. A Clean, Well-Lighted Place is a good story.
Date: 3/5/2015 5:03:00 PM
Hi Mark, So much truth to what you wrote. I love it! Hugs, Kimberly
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 3/6/2015 10:03:00 AM
Thanks. Glad you liked it. I commented on your Well Of Souls.

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