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Some folks found it hard Page 3 Unable to believe But after much debate The crowd began to cleave They turned in the direction Of the town, they now were sure Had a hundred wells just brimming With fresh water that was pure They walk for days unending Through sand and dust galore Until the reached the town Nestled on a canyon floor Some then posed the question "What if they don't want to share" That fearsome doubt persisted And began to fill the air "If they won't give us water Then we'll be force to fight" Let's get ready to attack And make them do what's right" Just 2 more pages.......I promise

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Date: 8/2/2014 8:37:00 AM
Lol, onward
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Date: 7/31/2014 8:35:00 AM
Only 2 more....this is epic...love all three so far :)...I grew up watching movies like this with my dad....cheers
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/31/2014 6:24:00 PM
Thank you Tim, you have a kind and giving heart.
Date: 7/31/2014 7:47:00 AM
:) page 3 great continuation, you could on and on for a while with this, I love the storyline poems...can't wait for more !
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/31/2014 6:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Casarah, this character and story comes so natural to me, I just have to let it out. I'm just thrilled someone cares to hear it.
Date: 7/31/2014 6:40:00 AM
Great thoughtful write Jerry ! Glad I read this ,, thnx for sharing!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/31/2014 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Doc, I really appreciate your comments and the time you take to read my work.

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