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Own Small Comforts

The tropical storm moves closer Brings wind and choppy seas From my window it's a gray mass But ride out the storm with me Trapped in total isolation All alone in my pain Even the joy of the Seagull Disappears with falling rain The rain brings it own small comforts Water to make things green Clouds to hold sun's thermometer Time alone to daydream Sponsor: PD Contest: Any Poem Written: June 08, 2013 Posted July 02, 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 12:42:00 AM

Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Shirley Candy

Date: 7/7/2013 9:25:00 PM

Beautiful words..!! congratz for being featured this week, Sara... *hug* ~ Shirley

John Posey

Date: 7/7/2013 6:51:00 PM

Sara, Congratulations on the win...I found out some years ago that true friends are the ones you choose to ride out the storms with.... Hugs... Jake

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/7/2013 4:29:00 PM

A wistful poem, love to ride out the storm with you : ) Terrific write and win! Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 7/7/2013 9:06:00 AM

Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Sara! It's a great write indeed which I extremely enjoyed this evening. Thanks a lot for sharing! love and hugs, Leonora

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/6/2013 5:26:00 PM

Beautifully done my friend and congratulations...This makes me wonder which storm it was...Was it Issac last summer? Of course it was a hurricane when it hit us...Severe flooding and no power for a week...I have written quite a few poems about the hurricanes I have experienced if you would care to check them out - Tim

Skat A

Date: 7/6/2013 1:49:00 PM

suave...... Sara, congrats :-] -Skat

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/6/2013 10:38:00 AM

Sara, your magic pen just flows with perfect lines.. Clouds to hold sun's thermometer, Time alone to daydream "...simple gracious beauty and congrats on your win :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/6/2013 10:27:00 AM

Dear Sara :nature is such a solace . I love this winning write. SuZ

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/6/2013 8:52:00 AM

A great congrats on your superb win, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Joseph May

Date: 7/6/2013 7:27:00 AM

Sara, congrats on your win with this lovely piece

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/6/2013 7:27:00 AM

Beautiful, Sara....Congrats!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/6/2013 6:01:00 AM

Lovely! Congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2013 11:05:00 PM

always missing you.... thank you Sara, for the lovely poem....... congratulations... from:Linda

Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/4/2013 4:23:00 PM

I love your thoughts with nature and life and how you transplant it from, mind, pen to paper or should i say keyboard.....beautiful write, I to am a nature nut lol. Goodluck excellent write sara ty4sharing, and also taking time to comment on my poem. Truly value & appreciate your presence:) Cheriex

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/4/2013 10:47:00 AM

Beautiful natural phenomena. Lovely done and wish you good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/3/2013 8:08:00 PM

Yes, as you say - rain can lead to cozy evenings but sometimes things get out of hand as they recently did with Sandy where I live. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2013 11:35:00 PM

Well, your any poem is a good entry, Sara. I sure liked it.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/2/2013 8:45:00 PM

Perserverance....Sara, you nailed it! Thanks for inspiration tonite! and stopping by my work! Jimbo

April Gabriella

Date: 7/2/2013 8:34:00 PM

I really like this. :) Very nice write!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/2/2013 8:32:00 PM

Wow, Sara, you have outdone yourself with this incredible write my friend! I believe you have masterfully written a terrific and tremendous poem! What a magnificent piece, a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

Joseph May

Date: 7/2/2013 7:35:00 PM

beautiful poem Sara...well penned