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Owls Night Masculine owl, brown metallic feathers, heavy winged Sores the twilight ozone meadow Traverses over waterways and banks of laden grass Transforms, as from a trance, into the hunter Haunting hoot tu-who sounds alert Between the silent grays of total black Eclipsed and thunderous flap on flight ignites the hunt Gliding, guided by precision giant eyes of wondrous yellow Gaining on the shadow of the mouse within its grasp Scrambling to escape Owl changes shape before attacking Preys before he merges on this species The specimen does not go unnoticed by another winged creature A female owl of white, who feels an urge to flee, takes flight Swoops down, takes the rodent in, before departing No thinking on the wing and wind No time to contemplate Brown owl feels smarter than all that, a regular intellect, yet Hovering up above, without his meal, there is regret Mr. and Mrs. Owl will sort things out together Not in the nest or dead of night on meadows bog But over dinner, consisting of the memory of mouse, no doubt Created on 8/04/14 for Night Owl – Poetry contest

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Date: 8/29/2014 10:22:00 AM
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Date: 8/25/2014 4:23:00 PM
Earl, , Congratulations, In Kelly's "Night Owl" contest. LINDA
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Date: 8/25/2014 4:43:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you for commenting. Have a nice night. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/25/2014 12:10:00 PM
A very poetic writing about an ordinary happening in an owls life. Very nice Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:07:00 AM
Ah... A tag team match with the rodent... Smart old birds. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/25/2014 11:44:00 AM
Hi Carol, Thank you. I hope you enjoyed my little birdie brained concept. Congratulations to you too on your fine win. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/25/2014 6:37:00 AM
Ahh, the life of an owl..well done and congrats. BG
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Date: 8/25/2014 9:17:00 AM
Good morning Barbara, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too on your fine win in this contest. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/25/2014 4:41:00 AM
wonderful description many congratulations on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 8/25/2014 8:37:00 AM
Hi Jan. Thank you very much. Congratulations to you too for your excellent poem and win. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/24/2014 9:35:00 PM
I loved your excellent descriptions of the owl itself.... I also enjoyed the adventure of this powerful write! Congratulations on your win, Earl!
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Date: 8/25/2014 8:50:00 AM
Good morning Kelly, Thank you so much for your kind words and for sponsoring this interesting contest. I appreciate your evaluation. Have a great day. Take care. Earl

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