Owl

owl alert nocturnal large eyes, staring through dark twilight skies alone, his hoots echo he flies across the moonscape ready to swoop down on his prey listening, searching, casting shadows as fall branches scratch at my windowpane Written on 9/20/2015 Etheree

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Sandra Haight

Date: 9/21/2015 4:32:00 PM

Wonderful descriptive imagery in your excellent Etheree, Laura. No need for the theme photo, your words painted it very well! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2015 7:24:00 PM

Thank you for your kind and encouraging words, Sandra! I'm glad you liked my poem :)

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 9/21/2015 1:41:00 AM

I liked your etheree too. Particularly like the line about the moonscape.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2015 12:54:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments, Mark. I appreciate them :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/21/2015 12:53:00 AM

Laura, What vivid imagery that expresses the world of the owl perfectly! Hurry and get your name off there as she judges blind...hugs, Connie 7

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/21/2015 1:02:00 AM

Forget what I said about your name please...I see that everyone's name is under copyright. It must be something new Soup added. Andrea probably won't be able to see it. Sorry...

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2015 5:15:00 PM

beautiful descriptive write Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/20/2015 5:20:00 PM

Thank you, Jan :) I appreciate your kind comments!