Owl

Watching with wise eyes, Gliding through the air of night, There goes its prey... Hoot!

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Christine Phillips

Date: 8/15/2013 4:24:00 PM

I like the last line it is very captivating. Nice work of art

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:44:00 PM

a cute little creation, Hanna. Congrats for your win.

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/26/2013 11:44:00 AM

Thankyou!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/22/2013 6:47:00 PM

Love the alliteration in the first line...The second line has great flow and is wonderfully descriptive and the last line gave me a little chuckle!...Congratulations Hanna - Tim

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/26/2013 11:44:00 AM

Thanks!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 2:49:00 PM

Uniquely creative winning work..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/22/2013 4:26:00 PM

Thanx!

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 12:50:00 PM

Very creative haiku... congratulations

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/22/2013 4:26:00 PM

Thankyou!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 11:57:00 AM

Good one Hanna.Congrats on your win.

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/22/2013 4:26:00 PM

Thanks!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/22/2013 4:26:00 PM

Thanks alot!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:12:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Hanna !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/22/2013 4:27:00 PM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:12:00 PM

Hanna :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/22/2013 4:28:00 PM

Thanks! and I will have to check that out! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/16/2013 11:06:00 AM

- Wise eyes, nice haiku Hanna! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Hanna Potter
Date: 7/22/2013 4:27:00 PM

I edited to that! thanks for the suggestion!