Overdone

Are you going to the circus? Is never a good line to use when she asks how her make-up looks

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Alexis Y.

Date: 9/21/2015 2:27:00 AM

Lol! Bill, I enjoyed this write. Please don't say that because she isn't going to be happy:-)Alexis

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/20/2015 2:39:00 PM

;) No, Bill. It surely isn't. Great write, though. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2015 2:28:00 PM

hahaha, My husband has this stupid thing he likes to say to me every time I am getting dressed for work. So is that what you are wearing? (good grief)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2015 2:27:00 PM

bill, on finding contests, you just scroll to Contests by Members on the left side (I think this is what you are already doing) So far as I know this is the only way to see all the contests together. Now let me read your poem