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Outside My Window

Outside my window I’m being hunted by a little black crow He’s circling my house like I’m on death row. He’s waiting to attack, but he doesn’t think I know, I’m being hunted by a little black crow... He’s driving me crazy, so I turned on the gas stove. As soon as he heard the switch, he flew into a nearby cove. Tic.. tic.. BOOM! Was the sound of the gas stove, my body was ripped like pulling on green cloves. Looks like I was killed by a little black crow -Shane P. 9/14/15

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Date: 9/30/2015 2:28:00 PM
Thanks guys for you support :D
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Date: 9/29/2015 5:11:00 AM
Very good congrats x Wendy
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:41:00 PM
Very wonderful take on the theme Shane! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:59:00 PM
Shane, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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