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Outside My Window

Nina B Timothy {Sunday 10th September 2015} OutSide My Window. The night sky emerges with its glory. Like a child, it peeks behind the day light As if unsure whether to make its presence known. How the colours are spread expertly, As an artistic prodigy with his canvass The wonderous display Leaves me in awe every night. A mirage to my eyes. The sky speaks of promises untold But there's a whole world out there Full of possibilities Just outside my window.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/6/2016 6:19:00 AM
Nina,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/30/2015 2:10:00 PM
Lovely poem Nina. Eagerly seeking beauty and discovery.
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:08:00 AM
Very wonderful take on the theme Nina! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:03:00 PM
Nina, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 9/11/2015 4:29:00 AM
hie welcome to poetry soup. its a great poem this one goodluck in contest.
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Date: 9/10/2015 5:51:00 PM
Hi Welcome to to this unique site that is PoetrySoup... I am glad to be 1st to welcome you into the group.... It is such a thrill to be a supportive community... Pay it forward works well in this community... BTW I am a fresh newbie just like you.... Keep them coming and cheers to you!
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