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Out the Window

The house is perfect for the autumn days With the windows built just for the sunlight Beautiful feel brought by the morning haze Letting light in, letting things be real bright With the windows built just for the sunlight Looking out the window you see beyond Letting light in, letting things be real bright You can see out there a nice little pond Looking out the window you see beyond There’s a pathway that leads into the yard You can see out there a nice little pond Seeing and not being out there is hard There’s a pathway that leads into the yard It’s a tender sight that I am seeing Seeing and not being out there is hard Opening my heart, this is sure pleasing It’s a tender sight that I am seeing Beautiful feel brought by the morning haze Opening my heart, this is sure pleasing The house is perfect for the autumn days Russell Sivey

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/22/2013 11:44:00 PM

"It's a tender sight that I am seeing" << This line just really jived well with me. The flow of it was just perfect. Pantoums are really fun to write in, but it's a bit of trick to get the hang of. Really great work here! I wanna see for myself, the place you're describing :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2013 9:37:00 AM

Very descriptive work..That house sounds just perfect..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visits..Sara

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/21/2013 5:33:00 PM

Russell; I love the picture you painted for us from your window, but why can't you go out there and be by the pond? Thanks for the visit. Many blessings....... Lucilla