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Out On the Porch (1)

Rain came down last night With it rolled the thunder and flashed the lightning Now the air is so clean, crisp, and cool Crickets abound singing praises While the rooster's strength is renewed Birds chirp with loving calls, for God has met their needs The earth sparkles with beauty from the cleansing bath Breezes gently carry appreciating tunes around Bamboo wind chimes gently give their hollow sound Calling, calming, relaxing; Breeze gently strokes my face Securing my relaxation For my attitude determines the musical tone of my home Totally cloudy this morn but could clear Responsibilities pull me away but I can't go just yet Need to stay on the porch for a while and commune with God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/6/2011 4:21:00 PM
I like the description of the everyday! The way it is presented makes it all the more meaningful
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Date: 9/23/2009 9:13:00 AM
Nice way to start the day. Vince
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Date: 9/23/2009 9:08:00 AM
so serene , a gem-Charma
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Date: 9/22/2009 4:17:00 PM
nicely penned, have a good day
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Date: 9/22/2009 12:16:00 PM
I liked your poet. You described everything in a very sensitive manner. Florentina
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