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Out of This World!

A black hole floats in space..... .....it slowly melts unspeakably spinning into a shining star~ Within ones spirit floating in space ones poor image melts couragously changing into a glimmering soul which in turn is... OUT OF THIS WORLD~

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Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/19/2009 4:34:00 AM

Another very strong write from you...within one spirit floating in space...yes indeed..awesome write and truths.

Brian Strand

Date: 3/15/2009 1:31:00 AM

Clever writing Jane..like the last line.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

John Rhinem

Date: 3/14/2009 3:17:00 AM

...."couragously changing into a glimmering soul which in turn is...(Smile) OUT OF THIS WORLD!"~ What a reflection this beautifully spendid write is of its writers "Precious Heart & Soul!!!"~Smile~"Perfect Dear!!!"~Again, I hope "You" are doing very well!? And, I miss "You" really!!!~"My Love & Warmth To You Always Jane, Forever, John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!:):)

John Rhinem

Date: 3/14/2009 3:10:00 AM

Smile~Wow, so very very beautiful!!!~How are You Janey? Extremely well I hope!!? It is so good to see "You" dear~You know, I have been thinking about and looking for You dear!!?~"A black hole floats in space.....it slowly melts unspeakably spinning into a shining star"~ Smile~So creatively and imaginatively beautiful dear!!!....cont....

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/14/2009 2:00:00 AM

Yes indeedy, out of this world, is where we all begin, and, and if we have will, live. awesome, friend - love, Kristin

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/13/2009 8:46:00 PM

This is an exceptonal write. It inspires one to look within and find the light that truly guides ones soul. So beautifull expressed. I love the way you included the universe into this powerful message of hope and peace. Smiles from Lolita