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Out of this world!

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Out of this world!

A black hole

floats in space..... slowly melts

unspeakably spinning

into a shining star~

Within ones spirit

floating in space

ones poor image melts 

couragously changing

into a glimmering soul

which in turn is...


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  1. Date: 3/19/2009 4:34:00 AM
    Another very strong write from you...within one spirit floating in space...yes indeed..awesome write and truths.

  1. Date: 3/15/2009 1:31:00 AM
    Clever writing the last line.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 3:17:00 AM
    ...."couragously changing into a glimmering soul which in turn is...(Smile) OUT OF THIS WORLD!"~ What a reflection this beautifully spendid write is of its writers "Precious Heart & Soul!!!"~Smile~"Perfect Dear!!!"~Again, I hope "You" are doing very well!? And, I miss "You" really!!!~"My Love & Warmth To You Always Jane, Forever, John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!:):)

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 3:10:00 AM
    Smile~Wow, so very very beautiful!!!~How are You Janey? Extremely well I hope!!? It is so good to see "You" dear~You know, I have been thinking about and looking for You dear!!?~"A black hole floats in slowly melts unspeakably spinning into a shining star"~ Smile~So creatively and imaginatively beautiful dear!!!....cont....

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 2:00:00 AM
    Yes indeedy, out of this world, is where we all begin, and, and if we have will, live. awesome, friend - love, Kristin

  1. Date: 3/13/2009 8:46:00 PM
    This is an exceptonal write. It inspires one to look within and find the light that truly guides ones soul. So beautifull expressed. I love the way you included the universe into this powerful message of hope and peace. Smiles from Lolita