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Our Song

Two halves of a whole
                  blend in perfect harmony
                                          Concert of the heart
The touch of your soul
                   fate plucked at my heart strings
                                             Life's music of love

For the contest "Special Sentimental Senyru"
Sponsored by Linda Marie
Placement: 5th

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  1. Date: 3/10/2011 7:03:00 AM
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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 10:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Paula. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:07:00 AM
    Many Congrats Paula for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:44:00 PM
    Beautiful Senryu, dear Paula. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 4:46:00 PM
    a beauty Paula. Poetic. Congrats to you

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 2:02:00 PM
    Musical, sentimental, and I like it! Congratulations, Paula!

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:25:00 AM
    Wonderful Senryu here!Congrats Paula on your well deserved win in this contest--kashinath

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:48:00 AM
    Hello Paula, A most beautiful melody you have played here with your words Congratulations your win Lov, Shar

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your very fine 5th Place win in the contest, Paula. Beautiful and heart touching. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:12:00 PM
    Congratulations Paula on your 5th place with your worthy poem, Great job. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:40:00 PM
    Just like Batman and Robin, this is a dynamic duo. Two very well written senryu entries. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with them.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Paula

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:34:00 PM
    Congrats Paula on your success in my contest.. thankxx for your constant support always ...

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 4:41:00 PM
    Fantastic Sentimental Senryu, Paula. It should do very well in Linda's contest. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 1:43:00 PM
    Yours is awesome, Paula. I hope it scores high and I'm giving it highest rating. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 2/3/2011 11:33:00 AM
    Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed..Good luck..Sara

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 7:53:00 PM
    Two very viable senryu for Linda Marie's contest. Well written and very descriptive.

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 7:44:00 PM
    A nice senryu Paula, good luck in the contest.. Luv*Skat

  1. Date: 2/2/2011 7:22:00 PM
    Perfection! Paula! jimbo