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Our Loving Thirst

our synergy burst encapsulates she and thee thralls our loving thirst .

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Date: 4/10/2015 11:41:00 PM

James, the only thing ingenius about traffic school is that it voids out the traffic ticket!! haha

James Fraser
Date: 4/11/2015 7:55:00 AM

It's still a good concept :)

Date: 4/10/2015 11:41:00 PM

so you don't drive?

James Fraser
Date: 4/11/2015 7:55:00 AM

Hi Andrea, nope, this Scotsman doesn't drive :) James...

Date: 4/10/2015 6:53:00 PM

Beautiful write James! Good luck in the contest.

James Fraser
Date: 4/11/2015 8:07:00 AM

Thank you kindly Tammy :) James :)

Date: 4/10/2015 4:52:00 PM

Beautifully penned...very deep.

James Fraser
Date: 4/11/2015 8:17:00 AM

Thank you MLK, I quite like this one. Happy weekend to you, James :)

Date: 4/9/2015 11:40:00 PM

Great senryu James, love the rhyming of the senryu!

James Fraser
Date: 4/10/2015 3:12:00 PM

Thought it would make it better if I threw the last line in. Thank you Upma, James :)

Date: 4/9/2015 11:00:00 PM

Cool title, James. Love that synergy burst line.

James Fraser
Date: 4/10/2015 3:20:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea, I quite like it :) Have a lovely weekend, James :)

Date: 4/9/2015 8:05:00 PM

Dino James, I like the synergy burst.. :D! and the last line.. mmmmmmmn :)! warm hugs xxx//olive eloisa ;)

James Fraser
Date: 4/11/2015 8:20:00 AM

Hiya Oliz, I quite like this short poem. I wonder where the inspiration came from, warm hugs always little one // Dino James xxxx

Date: 4/9/2015 4:22:00 PM

lovely romantic senryu James:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 4/10/2015 3:06:00 PM

Evening Jan, hugs and smiles as always, James :) :) xx