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Our Last Embrace

Finale; the end
He would take you forever-
If I only knew.
Eternal; our last embrace-
'Til my breath ebbs, too.

Won Honorable Mention in "A Warm Embrace " contest by John Heck

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  1. Date: 6/25/2010 8:17:00 PM
    hey, don't think i saw this one before. Congratulations for your HM,Amy! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/18/2010 4:34:00 AM
    really thought provoking we don't know if he dies in your arms...or if he is God? or if you wait to go to his arms when you die? So much in this! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/17/2010 6:17:00 AM
    Congrats on you HM win with this one Amy ;) rgds WN

  1. Date: 6/16/2010 9:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest "A Warm Embrace" Amy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/16/2010 12:23:00 AM
    nice one.

  1. Date: 6/14/2010 12:53:00 PM
    Nice. Roger

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 6:18:00 PM
    Congrats on HM win, Amy

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 4:43:00 PM
    Congrats Awesome Amy on your HM in the Warm Embrace contest... an awesome write from an awesome poetess.. enjoy your special honor... with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 11:17:00 PM
    VEry nice one. Romantic!

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 9:08:00 AM
    Enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 8:33:00 AM
    Wish you good luck in the contest. Nice expressions