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I notice you like detective stories He says yes I do I find the interest of the chase and the conclusion of the clue I enjoy the twist and turns and the turmoil of the hero and if he get his winnings or- Shoosh, I tell him I already got the point I was just thinking of a name to give our future little boy He stares at me and smiles O ja? And what does me liking detective stories have to do with naming our future son? Cause I would like to get something that you like and put it into something that you'll love Well... as long that it's not sherlock or holmes I think it'll do just fine I laugh and told him don't be silly You know I'm not that smart I thought it would be nice If first be it may a boy First name Case middle name Irwin And...we have to do something about your last name He gives a smirk and pulls on my shirt well what about a girl name? And don't even bother Mister future father but her name has already been given O ja? he says O ja indeed Her name will be Jazzlyn middle name Youth ...and your last name I'm sure won't be given... O another thing Case will be spelled with a K so his abbreviated name will be K.I.D! He pummels me down and I laugh without sound and says to me: Whatever name you give them I'm sure that we'll love our kids!

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Date: 8/4/2010 1:46:00 PM
Very clever interpretation of the contest. Congratulations. Lov, Joyce
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Date: 8/4/2010 12:22:00 PM
Clever! Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Even A Name Can Be Poetry'. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2010 9:13:00 PM
Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in Constance's contest with these wonderful words and a great presentation too.. enjoyed this read.. enjoy your victory tonight...with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:53:00 AM
wonderful sentiments Jessica.
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