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Our First Night

This Highland eagle On his maiden flight Atlantic ocean Land in sight His heart thumping As he yearns for his dove To share his life Capture her love This eagle has landed Met with a kiss The smile of two Enchanted bliss To his doves nest The talk is sweet Hearts on fire On their first meet Doorway entered Settled in Couch they sit Communication brings They share a wine A classic red Eagle and dove Romance is read Music lovers As they choose a song In each others arms It won't be long Slow dance Silhouette of two Their minds embraced Passions brew Their hands on a mission Clothes drift to the floor Signals read Amore Together they sit As their lips meet This bed of beds As their bodies greet Undulations Waves of love This two lovebirds Eagle and dove Height's scaled Heavens reached Flow of love Sweet like peach Warm bodies In breathless mode This cage-less birds On future's road They lie together True and right My dove and i On our first night http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/5/2009 1:48:00 PM
I agree with all of the other comments. James, You are a true romantic.
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Date: 7/1/2009 11:40:00 AM
hmmmm tis is sooo beautifull touches the heart of romance....
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Date: 6/25/2009 1:26:00 PM
This is such a romantic poem James, and written so beautifully encapturing the slow, gradual grace of love in all its beauty, I love this one, jo xx
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Date: 6/23/2009 2:49:00 PM
The quest for "enchanted bliss" lives, James, and I love the imagery in this poem as well as the way it flows with romance. In my mind, I can see the "eagle and dove" soaring together on their "first night." Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:05:00 AM
James, you have that romantic flow that shows through these excellent lines. Great write my friend!
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Date: 6/22/2009 2:13:00 PM
Oh my...the romance and touching story of love an the first night....lovely! ~
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Date: 6/22/2009 2:12:00 PM
James,..it brings me great joy to read the flowing romantic touch !!! This is an awesome declaration of love my friend,..and a great poem ! james
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Date: 6/22/2009 1:56:00 PM
wooowwww--this is woowwww-going to my favs--wonderful romantic write of love care and emotions------------charma
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Date: 6/22/2009 1:24:00 PM
Oooooooooooooo*.* So Romantic!I Love the whole Eagle and Dove Concept!Great work=)
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