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He came to me when I was dark and shone me in His light. He touched me when I felt thin, withered and dry. He took my tears, my need to cry and shook them gentle with a heavenly sigh. He spoke of faith without use of word, an omnipotent caress my heart heard:
The answer to oneness, Fulfillment and content Lies not in idle questions But in faith sincerely spent; Simple acceptance of His love to possess Is all our need, All joy to profess.
... CayCay Jennings August 30, 2015

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Date: 7/27/2018 5:22:00 PM
CayCay, I'm not sure how I missed this one, congrats on your trophy win. John
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win- a lovely poem!
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Date: 7/17/2018 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your $1 win. An inspiring prayerful message. Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Brian's contest, CayCay - blessings for many more, my friend! :-)
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:20:00 PM
Congrats on a spiritual poem winning.
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Date: 10/31/2015 12:25:00 AM
CayCay, Congrats on your nice win, have a nice one on Halloween, LUV SKAT
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Date: 10/30/2015 7:37:00 PM
Very well written, CayCay. The faith of a child, His child. Our Father does guide us in all things if we just listen to our heart. Congrats on placing in Casarah's contest.
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Date: 10/30/2015 6:27:00 PM
WEll done. Fewer than half the entries made the list, so your 15th poem was a GOOD one!! Congrats, and can't wait to hear your latest news.
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:38:00 AM
Amen to that, CayCay, faith, no matter how little,is all we need. Congratulations on your win, Viv x
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:10:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Caycay with this amazing write! Thnx for ur kind visit to my page!
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Date: 10/27/2015 12:38:00 PM
Congrats CayCay on this divine win!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/27/2015 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Balveen. More of a noticing than a win, but I'm happy just the same ... CayCay
Date: 9/22/2015 12:06:00 PM
Very nice and yes he is OUR FATHER ....:) Thank you for your comment on my poem.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/26/2015 9:41:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it. I regret I am so late thanking you, poems have a tendency to scroll out of sight and I didn't realize you were here. BUT I am glad to find you and I do thank you ... CayCay
Date: 9/16/2015 7:43:00 PM
What a beautiful way to express thanks in the goodness of the Lord. Great write.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 9:20:00 AM
I am so glad it resonated with you, Dan. When I need to lift my emotions above sadness or pain, I often recite the words as prelude to prayer. Thank you for commenting ... CayCay
Date: 8/30/2015 8:56:00 PM
I liked this poem a lot, CayCay. And especially the part where you said you heard God. This poem is full of meaning and feelings. A 7. ~~Blessings, Darlene
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 8/30/2015 9:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene. This one means a lot to me, it spilled out in one writing and continues to resonate with me. Sometimes I think a 'natural write' is God holding the pen ... Blessings, CayCay

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