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Our Fantasy

Thoughts read, fridge raided Opposite me with a wink She smiles with a twist Sultry spooning her wet lips Mint Ice Cream kisses adorn .

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/28/2014 1:50:00 PM

Wow! my dear friend James that's so sweet and romantic! lol...I love it the way you composed this tanka. A 7 from me! Have a great evening over there! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

James Fraser
Date: 11/28/2014 4:08:00 PM

Dorian, thank you dearest friend. Your comments on my humble writes make me smile, for that I thank you. Have a lovely weekend, James/hugs xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/28/2014 8:26:00 AM

hahahahahahahahahahahaha that's all plus wink!

James Fraser
Date: 11/28/2014 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Olive, I'll need to have a word with my imagination, haha. Cheers for the wink! - James :P

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/27/2014 7:31:00 PM

A flavoured tanka with edible dreams..Yum!

James Fraser
Date: 11/28/2014 11:59:00 AM

Yummy indeed Charmaine. Have a most lovely weekend - James :)xx

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2014 1:50:00 PM

mmmm a tasty little tanka treat James:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 2:26:00 PM

Our Fantasy 2 ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2014 2:18:00 PM

where do u put the flake and choc sauce?

James Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 1:59:00 PM

Mmm, and I so love Mint Ice Cream, James ;-) xx