Oriental Red

oriental red all signs of autumn fall in; orange shadows in line Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2012 9:21:00 PM

I enjoyed how you mixed these two similar bright colors of fall.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/16/2012 2:52:00 PM

My fav time of yr, Russell...like an oriental rug of deep rich colours...great images for the audience. gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/16/2012 2:51:00 PM

Dear lil cutesy Snapper, you are one adorable puppy! I didn't know you were the inspiration behind Russell's poetry!! I hope he will write some poetry dedicated JUST 2 U! Ps...my doggie named Sunny sends his regards...gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2012 2:04:00 PM

the marmalade of this season finds it beauty through your ku, russell!.. fine write as always!.. SOUP MAIL!..:)

Jack Horne

Date: 7/16/2012 12:56:00 PM

beautiful haiku, Russell

David Williams

Date: 7/16/2012 12:48:00 PM

Russell, a wonderful vision you portrayed here, I like your bio pic, your nose looks healthy ha ha...David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2012 12:45:00 PM

Enjoyed reading an early taste of autumn..Very descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..I made a mistake on my poem about Poulter's Measure..If you care to look back and see the change..Sara