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when the fiery stars hover their spears
over the dim forests,
and the burning moon makes love
to the naked sea,

When springs spins the pasture around
and the Nightingale stays up all night,

When the murmuring river
has a few of us whom it whispers in the ear,

When no one is around
but you and me,
......your ochre lips i have to kiss wet.

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  1. Date: 4/14/2011 5:52:00 AM
    Your mastery of the "descriptive" aspect of words is so good it almost feels illegal. Great Write...

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 4:11:00 PM
    your hard to believe.

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 3:15:00 PM
    great use of imagery.

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 8:47:00 AM
    "and the burning moon makes love/ to the naked sea,"..."When no one is around/ but you and me,/...your ochre lips i have to kiss wet." Outstanding images, KK! Good job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 1:35:00 PM
    The first 4 lines are heaven! Line 8 needs tweaking...perhaps..when the murmuring river whisper sweet nothings in our ears? & make the last 3 lines 2 lines? I've missed your writting on I go to more! Light & Love