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Ordinary Orange

Ordinary Orange Faded, worn down, frayed, by the tedium of orange it hung there, listlessly, wondering. ‘How does brilliance become ordinary, beauty become commonplace, monotony replace purpose.” Perhaps the best is not enough to merit a “selfie” moment, the fading orange passé, drab against the lighted skyline, a well known stranger passing by. 3/4/2016 submitted to – United Colors: ORANGE – Poetry Contest sponsor – Silent One

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:54:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:42:00 AM
Congrats John: I like that you could write on faded orange ......age is a natural progression and you have captured the truth of that. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 3/7/2016 5:32:00 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:31:00 PM
Hi John, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:37:00 PM
Gosh John, I would have placed this much higher. Congrats. BG
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:24:00 AM
John, lovely imagery...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:01:00 AM
- John, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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Date: 3/5/2016 12:49:00 PM
Reads like a winner..How does orange become ordinary?? Good question..Thanks for dropping by..I have watched a few Peanuts on TV and read a few cartoons..LOL..Sara
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Date: 3/4/2016 11:05:00 PM
very clever take on the theme John good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/4/2016 10:50:00 PM
Good take on the theme....Loved the comment about the selfie moment....Great write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/4/2016 8:25:00 PM
well done on its ordinariness. I have done an acrostic sonnet on this same theme. But maybe yours is better in its simplicity.
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