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Off to the nowhere Start from scratch Start with talking Begin with a hatch All new color Red White Blue Yet Blue takes over There’s no clue Always been the favorite Always been the best Orange was the color Despite all the rest Dipped in Orange Without real feel All in Blue Early to Heal Wild Lonesome Tiger Craving for his streak At least for a moment To have a proper break It’s always hard to witness It’s always tough to choose Coz either way you’re moving Someone’s got to lose You’ve gotta have the faith And eagerness, go define Believe your inner call You are strong as Carbyne Rise up, aim high Up above & fly Failure’s not an option You are hell as Carbyne Off to the nowhere Keeping the promise Lack of Orange Useless time piss Stalk you, lecture you Here begins my game Drive you mad Till you forget the name Renew the life you had Strive & fit the theory If facts don’t fit the theory Change’em, destroy the theory Break the habit, go insane Act like crazy, but lead the game For you know sometime, you might feel the shame Don’t hate yourself then & carry the blame It’s one life you live With mighty typhoons Red White Blue Or Orange SNAFU! It’s always hard to witness It’s always tough to choose Coz either way you’re moving Someone’s got to lose You’ve gotta have the faith And eagerness, go define Believe your inner call You are strong as Carbyne Rise up, aim high Up above & fly Failure’s not an option You are hell as Carbyne

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Date: 2/12/2014 8:41:00 AM
nice win Sameh, xox...SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:45:00 AM
Color speaks in volumes...EXCELLENT
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/14/2014 5:06:00 AM
True, thx a lot Syam :)
Date: 1/11/2014 9:04:00 AM
Welcome to the soup, an excellent first post, well done!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/11/2014 9:23:00 AM
Drop by and let me know when it is done.
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/11/2014 9:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot Mr. Richard.. It's my pleasure you have read it.. I'm working on a new one hopefully will finish it within the next couple of days.. Sameh
Date: 1/9/2014 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Same
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/10/2014 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram :)
Date: 1/8/2014 12:42:00 PM
congratulations same xx
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/10/2014 1:10:00 PM
Thx Mandy xx
Date: 1/7/2014 3:33:00 PM
Same, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/10/2014 1:10:00 PM
Sure I will, thx Linda :)
Date: 1/4/2014 6:50:00 PM
Same, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/10/2014 1:09:00 PM
Hey Skat, so sorry for my late response.. Happy u loved the poem! I'm not active 100% but I'm trying to find the time for it! I will visit yours, it would be my pleasure.. Love, Sameh
Date: 1/4/2014 11:53:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Same ! - A very well written poem !! - I like it a lot. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/4/2014 3:52:00 PM
Thx Anne-Lise it's my pleasure & I'm happy u liked it.. I'll post more when I have time.. It seems interesting here & I'm going to follow your work too.. Have a blessed 2014.. Lots of love.. Sameh
Date: 1/4/2014 11:02:00 AM
We need to have faith.. We need the orange in the sky... Interesting ending... LINDA
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Sameh Wahid
Date: 1/4/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thx Linda, I'm still new here & I'm exploring but I promise I'll be more active.. I'm glad u liked the ending & yeah orange is definitely important!
Date: 1/4/2014 11:00:00 AM
Same, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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