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Open Your Eyes

The anger in the world is so overwhelming My eye's are so open and there is no use pretending That we're forced fed the bad, and now evil's prevailing It makes me assume that this world is soon ending Please open your eyes, heart, and your ears. The media is trying to over flood us with fear Fears like a poison that now runs through your veins When we live in fear nothings attained Rip fear out your minds and so much is gained Then they'll fear us when this world is retained By Carmen Castro Copyright@2012

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Date: 7/1/2012 6:50:00 AM
indeed many have a veil over their eyes,that must be lifted to give vision, May the Lord,bless,comfort,and direct your path day by day
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Carmen Castro
Date: 7/1/2012 4:45:00 PM
Yes they do Stephan... Not everything you see on TV is the truth we have to use better judgement : )
Date: 6/7/2012 6:39:00 PM
So true,I love this,great write
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/7/2012 6:43:00 PM
Thanks Richard, Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 6/6/2012 10:57:00 AM
Carmen this is a "wake up" poem.....Yes, open your eyes...very well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/6/2012 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 6/6/2012 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful conclusion in the last two lines. What a motivational message <3
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Carmen Castro
Date: 6/6/2012 10:18:00 AM
Thanks Brittany

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