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Unplanned pregnancy...I guess it could be called a bit of a cock up! 7th April 2015

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/8/2016 9:43:00 PM

I picked this one out based on the title and the style....and oh Wow...had no idea what I was in for! Quite comical Jan. Nice Monoku here LOL! MC

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2015 4:34:00 PM

A creative and practical monoku beautifully done. Humorous one. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2015 4:40:00 PM

funny in one way BL but sad in another I guess:-) Hugs jan xx

Lei Strauss

Date: 4/8/2015 9:53:00 PM

This happens every time... so sad.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/9/2015 1:36:00 AM

It does Lei! Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/8/2015 7:27:00 PM

What is really sad about this photo...well sad for me anyways is that they used a mold of mine to design that pregnancy test stick. I guess that's why you used the line "a 'bit' of a cock up" and maybe that's why I drive the largest Hummer they sell. Great monoku Jan! By the way I'm just kidding. I don't drive a Hummer!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 7:32:00 PM

You crease me up my friend - no matter how tough life is for us you always have the ability to make me smile:-) thank you for being a part of my life:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 4/8/2015 3:10:00 PM

Love the party naked comment from Janet. One day I desire to party naked, and dream the next nine months :-) hugs always Jan, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 3:15:00 PM

I hope your dreams come true my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

James Horn

Date: 4/8/2015 5:46:00 AM

Did you know that the further the end sticks out the more likely there well be twins? Also, those who are the poorest spellers in school have the biggest likelihood of become spell-bound when adults. Great things are bound to happen in Great Britain. That is why we Americans always like going to Great Britain. Jim Horn aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb cccccccccccccccccc ddddddddddddd eeeeeeeeeee ffffffffffffff gggggg hhhh ii j

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 5:51:00 AM

Thanks for your insightful comment James:-) Jan x

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 4/8/2015 4:48:00 AM

Lol Jan. This is good. My kind of stuff. Hahaha...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 5:50:00 AM

Thank Njeri:-) hugs jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/8/2015 2:57:00 AM

Interesting thought. Enjoyed.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 3:20:00 AM

Thanks Ravi:-) hugs jan x

Deborah Turner

Date: 4/8/2015 2:08:00 AM

Hi, Jan thanks for the soup mail. Love poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 2:14:00 AM

Thanks Deborah - hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/8/2015 2:04:00 AM

That about sums it all up!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 2:06:00 AM

thanks ML lovely to see you back:-) Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2015 10:56:00 PM

Oh, my goodness, I hope your not "P". I'm with Janet !!!! Shit does happen when your having fun. :) Blessings dear friend

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 2:05:00 AM

Eve me pregnant - now that really would be a miracle! Hugs jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/7/2015 6:55:00 PM

ohhh you are so bad today!! But in my mothers infamous words, "Sh!t happens when you party naked." PS these were words said to me when I told her that my fiance (now husband) were having a baby. Definitely doesn't have to be a tragedy, my Hannah is a blessing to us all with her huge hart and willingness to help anyone.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/7/2015 7:03:00 PM

me bad Janet - noooooooooo it must be my alter ego Stan who is on here lol - I agree with you once the initial shock has sunk it it can be a blessing in disguise:-) hugs jan xx