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Only You . . .

Only you will know how to make my heart whole Only you will know the spot just beneath my earlobe I surrendered to you time and again Yet only to you will I do it once again Sultry sounds emanate from your each parched word Making sweet memories so completely in accord Your lips brush past mine and cause me to quiver Your hot breath on my nape makes me shiver Only to you do I submit only to you do I respond Only to you do I vent my untamed wants Your very smile causes me to blush Your sweet words taunts my crush Only you will know how to make my heart whole Only you can tap into my heartfilled soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/19/2008 2:34:00 PM
This is an excellent poem and it flows very well. I like the figurative used to cast images of passion. This sounds like a song I used to listen to entitles, "Only you little star." I could meditate on this one. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/18/2008 2:19:00 PM
a write filled wiht hope love and longing, I hope these come to pass for you, sensual and steamy write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/18/2008 10:24:00 AM
That is a lucky only you person that can make you feel so good. I Hope they know how they make you feel. Lovely, sexy write.
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Date: 10/18/2008 1:29:00 AM
Ah excellent write!! Truly got me within. Some people are so special:) And we can always open our untamed desires...as you said....only to them. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/17/2008 5:20:00 AM
What a beautiful love Sonnet! I can relate, as I thank all the powers that be. Such a gift to share something so deeply intimate . Excellent write. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/17/2008 2:44:00 AM
I just love to read of love - To have that one person that the Lord means for you to be with is to be at home - Least thats how my wife makes me feel - God Bless
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