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Only Soldiers - For Contest

Only Soldiers They are thanked for their service by those who never served. Commended for their bravery by those who never donned the colors of the country the red, the white, the blue. They are left alone with demons that only they can name seek the silent comfort of those who know the same, they limp alone in honor of the men they used to be slowly turn invisible to the people they keep free. In silent nod and gesture they salute in passing pain bathed in thanks for service, awash in tearless rain, not heroes, only soldiers, in the shadows without name. 11/10/2013 submitted to – Being Invisible – poetry contest sponsor – SKAT A

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Date: 5/1/2016 8:47:00 PM
I don't see how you deviated from any guidelines, John. It should do quite well Wish I had time to search for another poem of yours to see. As it is, I am way behind in comments and hubbie is expecting dinner on the table. YIKES
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Date: 5/1/2016 8:54:00 AM
John, oh this is breathtaking in its sadness and what makes it worse that it is true, in the USA and Canada it is a travesty that heroes in time are treated so unfairly and do become invisible, wonderful write for the contest, a winner to me, 7+++ ~
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thanks BW, I appreciate your comment and high mark,
Date: 4/30/2016 6:10:00 PM
wow, what a great poem, John. Those poor lonely soldiers! I expect to see this one top of the list.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:37:00 PM
Andrea, I don't think this will make the contest list of "winners" as I may have deviated from the guidelines.
Date: 4/25/2016 1:03:00 AM
Great job John, sad but true. We have our remembrance day today (anzac day). Dear to Australian hearts.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:34:00 PM
Sadly, Craig, every country has memories of war's ugliness.
Date: 4/24/2016 11:18:00 PM
True n perfectly beautiful John.. love ur way with words..Gl in contest!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2016 9:14:00 PM
Thank you John, for bringing visibility to these men, and women. J.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 4/24/2016 7:14:00 PM
Oh John this touched me so deeply - so so sad to see how these amazing people are now treated.. I wrote a poem about veterans living out on the street and being invisible:-( hugs jan 7 and faves
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thanks Jan for the fav and the high mark. Too many of he wounds of war are "invisible"

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