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One's Own Slipstream

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Leading up to one’s reflective time, one often becomes aware (or coerced) into believing the “free ride,” not yet aware that when all is said and done, there is always a price.  How revealing the journey for those who pay attention and respect the oblique as answers in hiding.

One’s Own Slipstream by Odin Roark Movement frozen Knows of risks in waiting. Three lanes, Seven lanes, Life’s autobahn, Always beckoning, Seduction to follow. Isn't that what it's all about? Starting way back… A grade school playground, Force takes power. To stay on side lines, Failure. The longing to steer into the "follow" lane, Surge to the power's fast lane, Grab the pull, The bully in front, Breaking resistance, Its girth of momentum unstoppable. You glimpse for the first time…Free rides, No risk, Cocooned safety. School yards, I-Hop revisits, GPA encroachment, Graduation, Freedom, Pedal to the metal. "The World is a Vampire" You know not, Not yet. The interview The job The greater pull, Fast lane in view, Entrance ramp available. Quintessential speed…yes. Follow the leader, Rise to the top, Meet the power, Meet the future spouse, Ah, The speed, The even greater pull, The free ride really looks free. Perpetual hang-overs follow… The grind, The history, The babies, The promotions, The divorces, The... The... Finally the peace… The return, The dirt roads, The two wheeled bike, The ruts, The flats, The... The... Discovering one’s own slipstream, Nirvana.

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